Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.What the problems would beWhat are the main causesYour suggestions

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Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.
What the problems would be
What are the main causes
Your suggestions

Dear Mr. X,

My name is Y, one of the “ Helmsdale drive” dwellers. I would like to lodge a complaint against the garbage disposal and the dirty roads because of the same which was rapidly rising in the recent times.

To begin with, I would like to bring the problems caused by the garbage disposal to your notice. This was because of the two reasons. On the one hand, garbage disposed by the neighbors are not properly tied and disposed in the appropriate designated area.

On the other hand, due to the shortage of the garbage bins, the trash was spilled all over the road beside the bin. This attracts the rodents nearby and spreads the infectious diseases. Moreover, it also brings the rubbish smell all over the area and causes the air pollution.

As a community head, please kindly do the needful to rectify the problem. I would also like to suggest something to overcome the issue. Please address the neighbors and bring the awareness about the issue. Kindly increase the number of bins in designated area. Moreover, you can separate it as recyclable and non recyclable bins which also decrease the negative impact on the environment.

Kindly, increase the employees for the litter disposal also. These ideas will eventually decrease air and land pollution. Your sincere attention and prompt action is highly appreciated.

Yours truly,
Y

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. X, My name is Y, one of the ' Helmsdal...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02620087336 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53279626522 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1131017673 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7058823529 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4705882353 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15381987577 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463133583228 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550791479353 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750565238193 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356007728709 0.0580467560999 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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