Write a letter to the director of your company to recommend a group in your local community which deserves help.
In your letter, you should tell:
• why you suggest helping this group
• how your company can help this group
• what the benefits your company will in return for.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to refer you one indegineous community who require assistance from well known organisation just like us.
The reason why I am refering this only community is that I have been with their contact since 2010, and I have noticed that they are not only diligent towards their duties but also an honest with whom they work. Moreover, they are looking for some help from such organisation.
Well, I feel that they do not need any financial aid, but they need more knowledge for education, for example, where can they apply for higher degree?, From where can they get schorlarship or free seats? Which will be the best degree? and so on. So, our organisation can arrange regular free workshops on mothly or quartely basis to spead knowledge about these all because we have so many hardworker persons who have been acquiring deep knowledge for such things.
In the future, we can also hire some of the most talented and genious candidate in our own company where we can be benefited either in their talent or a royalty which they have by innate. we can save huge amount for advertisements when we do for hiring only.
Hoping for the best reply.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan
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| 2023-12-22 | Rehana Diwan | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to refer you one ...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...e seats? Which will be the best degree? and so on. So, our organisation can arrange...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...or a royalty which they have by innate. we can save huge amount for advertisements...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, well, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74528301887 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4522677149 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3813226116 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111435222679 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475430125769 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479090036702 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504929829986 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383743299479 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.