Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter
describe what this book was about
explain how this book influenced you
say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to express my views on a master piece and best seller, about how it impacted me. Recently I read a series of books famously known as Harry Potter, composed by author Jk Rowling.
Although, this book is a pure work of fiction and fantasy, it is equally popular among adults as well as children. If we discuss about the content, it includes magic, a kid whose name is Harry Potter and about his life and challenges he faced after his parents died. In addition, how he survives throughout this journey with support of his two best friends and companions of his parents and defeated a dark lord of magic world who killed his guardians.
This book impacted my mind, although its a purely fictional character, but its quite motivational and inspirational how you can fight back and be strong and can do impossible if you have faith in you. Not only this, it picturizes a great bond of friendship, love and trust and no matter what the situation is , if you have right support everything can be accomplished.
Definitely, this book will influence masses of people, as its message and content is not limited to kids only, however, its up to an individual's perspective how you perceives a book and thought process.
I hope you will like this article and being a regular reader, this will be my contribution for magazine.
Thanks and Regards
Niharika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... This book impacted my mind, although its a purely fictional character, but its q...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rust and no matter what the situation is , if you have right support everything ca...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...t is not limited to kids only, however, its up to an individuals perspective how yo...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ted to kids only, however, its up to an individuals perspective how you perceives a book an...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'perceive'
Suggestion: perceive
...p to an individuals perspective how you perceives a book and thought process. I hope y...
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Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agazine. Thanks and Regards Niharika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6790850407 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644628099174 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1252338124 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364942811188 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123823895628 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753629500135 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193351517552 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454407802478 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.