Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to recommend the book "Never Give Up" written by Sir. Alex Ferguson, the former Manchester United club coach. This book is an autography of him, which encouraged me most as a loyal fan of this club.
Upon reading the activity "The book that influenced me most" in your new issue yesterday, the name of the book showed up in my mind immediately. In this autography, it mainly illustrated us Sir Alex's careers from football player to coach. He was the one who build the team of 92', which gained plenty of champions during the time they conquored the England top football league. Behind the glorious history, it was a real and painful story of this tough scotland oldman.
Watching Manchester United games from my childhood, I was deeply moved by the passion of Alex who guided his team on the pitch. After reading his book, I was shocked by the endeavors he made to win trophies. For many times, the teams he led not only lost matches but also were on the edge of broken. It was him to stand out and lead his young man to strggule with innumerable difficulties. This book would also encourage people who like football, as the one of most successful football club in the world, this club and the legend coach are imminent to us.
Thank you for your cosideration on my suggestion, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Tony
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71774193548 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58240867164 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.229020938 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302225862477 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868429514697 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834180461089 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175667358329 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582510594933 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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