The map shows us the southwest airport upgrade and reconstruction plans next year.
Generally, the plan is about to upgrade the airplanes transportation capacity by building more terminals and infrastructures that can offer more service to passengers.
As the present map illustrates, there are 8 terminals with walkway for passengers to get on and off planes. However, in the future, the single terminal buiding is to get a huge upgrade with a "Y-shape" terminal bulding reconstrution. In details, there is about to build 12 new terminals, only 6 old ones would be kept.By the new redevelopment of the terminal buidling, the walkaway is about to be upgraded to Car line due to the expansion of the building. What's more , there is to build a shop in the building, too.
With more terminals, the airport is to serve more passengers. Right now,there is just one cafe in depatures hall outside the sercurity passport control. In this plan, there would be a new bage drop in this hall, morevoer, the arrival hall is about to build another cafe, an ATM machine as well as a Car hire spot. This redevelopment plan would level up the ability of passenger transportation and service of southwest airport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'airplanes'' or 'airplane's'?
Suggestion: airplanes'; airplane's
...rally, the plan is about to upgrade the airplanes transportation capacity by building mor...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l buiding is to get a huge upgrade with a 'Y-shape' terminal bulding re...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...erminals, only 6 old ones would be kept.By the new redevelopment of the terminal b...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...e due to the expansion of the building. Whats more , there is to build a shop in the ...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he expansion of the building. Whats more , there is to build a shop in the buildin...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...t is to serve more passengers. Right now,there is just one cafe in depatures hall outs...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATM'.
Suggestion: ATM
...hall is about to build another cafe, an ATM machine as well as a Car hire spot. This redeve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02475247525 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18171692254 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0004081616 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947248581962 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448979597905 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583110197659 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814511853041 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741396708272 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.