The answer to which is the most happiest time of their lives, teenage or adult, varies greately among different people. Since both young and old times could be valued as the highlight time for us. AS my concern, I think the teenage life time is happiest..
On one hand, some people contend the adult life are happier than the young one. This is understandable in that they may suffered a lot from life. People at my parents' age in China for instance, they will never look back the time when they were still boys and girls. Since most of them starved then, even some weak guys died from it. That time was a tragedy to them. After their growing up, Chinese economy rocketed upward, they enjoyed this huge benefit and lived a happy life from that time.
On the other hand, there are another group of people had happier youth times. First, most teenagers would not take the resposiblities of making money for their family, only need to study hard at schools. Second, they can make more mistakes with less cost. Different from the people at my parent's age in China, we lived a happier life when we were young since the hadr time in China had passed.
Both of these life times are considered as the happiest time by some people. In my opinion, the time when people were young is happiest.With less pressure of society and have lots of genuine friends for live, there are so many enjoyable memories for them. People can be young only for once. So we need to appreciate the teenage time which is the most precious and happiest at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
The answer to which is the most happiest time of their lives, teenage or adult, ...
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Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
The answer to which is the most happiest time of their lives, teenage or adult, ...
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Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... us. AS my concern, I think the teenage life time is happiest.. On one hand, some peop...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... think the teenage life time is happiest.. On one hand, some people contend the...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
... On the other hand, there are another group of people had happier youth times. Firs...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...time when people were young is happiest.With less pressure of society and have lots ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, even so, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54121863799 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14672302065 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4669902977 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5294117647 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292819452708 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1034001838 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631716635115 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19239831837 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445249569362 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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