Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A cohort of people considers age as a crucial cornerstone of happiness. Although some pf people believe that teenagers can experience more joy in comparison with adults, others disagree with this view. There are strong opinions on both sides, and I will explain.
From a psychological point of view, adults have difficulties and responsibilities in order that they can satisfy all their families' desires and needs. these obstacles cause stress and pressure, which diminish the level of happiness in their life. While teenagers live in their dreams and because they are dependent on their families financially and emotionally, they have not any worry about future lives. Besides that, youth cannot comprehend the facts as a way as adults do. For instance, not caring about drawbacks in some situations, teenagers have an opportunity to experience unique enjoys, of which mature adults deprive. these are very reasons why some people consider teenage ages as the happiest time.
On the other hand, being an adult has its advantages, through which people can achieve more happiness. From an interactional point of view, adults' interpersonal relations are more durable, which makes a profound contribution to creating unique events and experiences, including falling in love, getting married, having a baby, and so forth. Another prized aspect of adult life is related to adults’ independence. In this period of life, people learn how to make money, be a body of society, and can achieve their aims and desires. these are some achievements which people cannot gain unless they become mature.
In conclusion, both stages of life have their excitement and enjoyment. However, from my point of view, adult ages are more happiest, through which people can achieve unique experiences and feelings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39084507042 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81991695984 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.22923384 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263744931342 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936142177824 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518997682979 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178008518258 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301739276105 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.