Write a letter to the environment officer in your area complaining about the garbage problem in your neighborhood and say What is causing the problem Why is it bothering you Suggest a solution to rectify the problem

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the environment officer in your area complaining about the garbage problem in your neighborhood and say
- What is causing the problem?
- Why is it bothering you?
- Suggest a solution to rectify the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident at Thakur complex, Kandivali west. I am writing this letter to complain about garbage collection in our area. We all people have been suffering this issue for the last month.

Let me explain the menace at length. Garbage collection is very irregular in our colony. Sometimes the litter collection team comes once in a week which results in the accumulation of huge garbage. Due to this, the garbage spreads in the whole lane and makes it dirty, even we are unable to walk properly in the colony. Moreover, bad smell comes out of litter which affects air quality and deteriorates the health of people.

Many members have been suffering from respiratory diseases for the last week and I am too concern about if it would spread to other members of the area and my family. What will happen if this problem becomes so severe that it will be too late to control it?

To solve this problem on priority, I expect to collect all garbage from our colony as earliest and sanitize the whole area properly. For the long-term solution of this issue, I am requesting you to increase the frequency of garbage collection such as daily or alternatively.
Hope you would understand the seriousness of this issue and take appropriate action as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
Nirav Dave

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 258, Rule ID: OR_ALTERNATIVELY[1]
Message: Use simply 'or'.
Suggestion: or
...ncy of garbage collection such as daily or alternatively. Hope you would understand the serious...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ppropriate action as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Nirav Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82456140351 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6131371353 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8760458223 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5714285714 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163562236749 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540607716682 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621909173408 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788058153119 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460141611007 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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