Dear James,
I hope you and your family are all well. I am writing this letter to seek your assistance to arrange money for a charity event going to take place in my society next month.
Allow me to elaborate it, there is an organization in my society that comprises of some prestigious people who have decided to gather decent amount of cash to help the blind children from the school of disabled. Moreover, this money
will be used for their eye surgery which I believe is a very noble deed and I would also like to contribute into it.
But even after immense efforts, we are in shortage of cash. Hence, I thought it will be a great notion to share this problem with you and ask for your help.
It would be truly appreciable if, you can can spread this news in your community as well, so that people who are interested to do charity can participate in this event. There is no limit of donation and I have linked all the necessary details along with this letter.
Seeking your kind assistance.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...e is an organization in my society that comprises of some prestigious people who have decide...
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Line 10, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
... It would be truly appreciable if, you can can spread this news in your community as w...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52127659574 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34906529093 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8915104238 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22533142779 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785990707687 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065621346907 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102589626646 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628810794478 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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