Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing. In your letter
– Tell your friend about the party
– Ask for the recipe
– Explain why you need the recipe from his/her country.
Dear Marck,
It has been long time since we met or had any conversation. I hope you and your family are happy and staying healthy during ongoing pandemic situation. I'm writing this letter to ask you for a recipe of one Chinese dish. I am feeling excited and hope you will too by knowing about my transfer to Shangai at China. To mingle with my office staff and neighbours, I've decided to conduct party in the next weekend.
As most people belong to this country and preference would be given to eat their traditional food only. I'm requesting you to share the process of cooking the delicious Manchurian with fried rice which is a popular Chinese cuisine. The reason why I'm asking you is that you born and bought up in China and I know cooking is your hobby so I'd get better ideas from you to prepare mouth watering food. Moreover, I'm oblivious to any chinese dishes and numerous videos on You tube have been watched by me, however I've not got proper idea about its preparation.
Thanking you in advance for your help and will surely keep connecting with each other.
Warm wishes,
Nirav
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-19 | nirav9971 | 44 | view |
| 2020-12-05 | rukz | 77 | view |
| 2020-12-05 | rukz | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-22 | Gunjan Pratap | 58 | view |
| 2019-07-22 | harmankaur | 44 | view |
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they dont really need them Why is it happening in your opinion Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society 84
- Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his her country for the party you are organizing In your letter Tell your friend about the party Ask for the recipe Explain why you need the recipe from his her country 44
- Some people say that the bicycles are a good modern means of transportation Other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages Discuss both view points and give your own opinion 46
- Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like while others say that they should think more realistically about their future Discuss the both views and give your opinion 73
- Many people say that the life of people who live in the large cities is not comfortable What are the reasons behind this What could be the solution 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...lthy during ongoing pandemic situation. Im writing this letter to ask you for a re...
^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...angai at China. To mingle with my office staff and neighbours, Ive decided to con...
^^
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...e with my office staff and neighbours, Ive decided to conduct party in the next we...
^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ven to eat their traditional food only. Im requesting you to share the process of ...
^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...popular Chinese cuisine. The reason why Im asking you is that you born and bought ...
^^
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...e cuisine. The reason why Im asking you is that you born and bought up in China an...
^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ina and I know cooking is your hobby so Id get better ideas from you to prepare mo...
^^
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... prepare mouth watering food. Moreover, Im oblivious to any chinese dishes and num...
^^
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...u tube have been watched by me, however Ive not got proper idea about its preparati...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61224489796 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35921809875 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719387755102 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9284149125 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255398584671 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843036448859 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932668405219 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165487523158 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359270009717 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.