Dear Sahil,
It seems a long time and we haven't talked for a while. I hope you and your family are doing well in the post-Covid world.
Since our last conversation, we discussed that you are looking for some change that will boost your experience and salary in your professional career.
Recently, I received a notification from HR that the company has a large volume of vacancies for database administrators profile because of new projects landed in my firm.
The job description of the database administrator's profile requires the proactive monitoring and management of databases in terms of installation, up-gradation, and security maintenance. Besides, you also need to provide solutions to clients while designing the architecture. Since you hold an ample amount of experience in database architect profile, I think it would be a great chance for you to join my organization. Moreover, you'll get benefits such as extra work allowances, transport allowance, and a one-time meal in your daily shift.
If you make any decision in joining my firm, give me a ring on my mobile as well as pass me your resume on abc@itel.com. I will submit your resume to the HR department where they will start processing your resume and will give you a call for an interview. In all this duration, if you will need any information about my company work and ethics, you can drop me a text and we can have a discussion later.
Looking forward to hearing a positive response.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...r Sahil, It seems a long time and we havent talked for a while. I hope you and your...
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Line 8, column 431, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... you to join my organization. Moreover, youll get benefits such as extra work allowan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.016 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03268593824 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9557241556 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144309544298 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443617746273 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316848881189 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666760141516 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337432045512 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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