Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it

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Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it

Dear Ken,

I hope you are doing good. I writing to you regarding that I am planning to relocate to my native place. Also, I am planning to provide my items of furniture to you.

First up all, I am very pleased to inform you that I have got the Government job which one is near to my hometown. Hardly, It will take 6 kilometers from my native in order to this I am planning to relocate to next month. Also, I would like to share my furniture items with you. I know that you are going to marry soon and looking forward to setting up your house. Currently, I have TV Showcase set, One wooden bed, 4 chairs, single table and I have 1 sofa with me.

I would like to share my thoughts that you can come to my house next Saturday morning. We can have a good lunch over here after that we can call for packagers and movers to take my all furniture items.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
John

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...Dear Ken, I hope you are doing good. I writing to you regarding that I am plan...
^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Hardly' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...t job which one is near to my hometown. Hardly, It will take 6 kilometers from my nati...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29213483146 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26623949179 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8607881119 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6666666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13949536389 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646471568316 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363731389945 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949489280918 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283571951252 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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