Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it

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Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it

Dear Ken,

I hope you are doing good. I am writing to you regarding that I am planning to relocate to my native place. Also, I would like to provide my items of furniture to you.

First up all, I am very pleased to inform you that I have got the Government job which one is near to my hometown. Normally, It will take 6 kilometers from my native to my new office in order to this I am planning to relocate to next month. Also, I would like to share my furniture items with you. I know that you are going to marry soon and looking for an all the setup for your new house. Currently, I have TV Showcase set, One wooden bed, 4 chairs, single table and I have 1 sofa with me what I like to give it to you.

I have a plan that you can come to my house next Saturday morning. We can have a good lunch over here after that we can call for packagers and movers to take my all furniture items to your house.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
John

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0618556701 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18415632357 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551546391753 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4036017754 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14788806303 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687950402687 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317661654595 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100900391479 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306683250619 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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