Dear Sam,
It's been so long since we have met, I hope you and your family are in the best of health. I recently found out about your travel plans to visit India, so thought of sharing some recommendations. The best time to visit the country would be somewhere between November to January, which I believe is summer season in your country.
There is a tourist attraction that I would definitely not want you to miss it as I am pretty aware of your hobbies and interests. I know your plans to visit Kerala which has some coastal beauty, however, I would rather recommend you to do something adventurous than having a plain and vanilla itinerary. There's this place, Rishikish, which is in the northern part of the country, is a must visit as it offers white water ganga rafting.
I was also thinking if you would be able to alter your itinerary and add my city to it. It'll be great to catch up after so long and also, I could show you some of the best places and hidden jewel of my city.
I hope to catch up with you soon.
Best wishes,
Maheem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...n having a plain and vanilla itinerary. Theres this place, Rishikish, which is in the ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40816326531 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37761671101 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1633332075 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19071588236 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754739102327 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518567614335 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998612857482 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771240177416 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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