Dear Rohan,
I hope this letter finds you well. I m excited to know about your interest to visit India.
As you know India has got all the weather in a year. Since you are coming from cold country Canada, summer might be quite harsh for you. Hence I would suggest you know to come around between November to January. It would be great if you come in December, my cousin brother getting married in same month. I know you always wanted to see Indian marriage. This would be a great opportunity to meet my all family members and relative.
Apart from that we can plan some of the places like Delhi, Agar which are near from my town. From Delhi we can go to place such as Haridwar and Uttarakhand. This will give good amount of overview of Indian temples and spiritual culture. Additionally, Uttarakhand has got several adventure water sports such as river rafting.
I really hope you’ll be able to come over.
Your friend,
Dev
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...about your interest to visit India. As you know India has got all the weather ...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...a, summer might be quite harsh for you. Hence I would suggest you know to come around...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in same month. I know you always wanted to see Indian marriage. This would be a ...
^^
Line 6, column 29, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...relative. Apart from that we can plan some of the places like Delhi, Agar which are near ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to come over. Your friend, Dev
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, well, apart from, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6369047619 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29121826163 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.982499997 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.6428571429 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130274299107 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520243924451 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560617765863 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753958353204 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409595923485 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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