It has been always challenging to manage resources on planet. Some people argue that it is a responsibility of government to provide enough resources to their citizen. On contrary, some people believe every individual should be held responsible to reserve it. In my opinion, we all should work together to preserve our water and in this essay i will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly, by controlling water supply people will realise importance of water. What I mean by this is that when we already know how much resource we have, we use it smartly. For instance, if petrol bunk are close due to some reason then we use our vehicle wisely. similar to that when our phone battery is drain we use it less if we do not have electricity. Hence sometime scarcity teaches us best utilisation of what we have.
Secondly, If we get water in limitation other people who is in more need get enough of it. To be more precise, Some people might have more requirement of water than other. Let's take an example, Farmer has ample of water requirement then local people. So if urban people will be getting water continually than it will be challenging to full fill water requirement for him.
In conclusion, everyone is responsible to preserve natural resources either it is water or other. I respect decision of government to control the misuse of water which will be beneficial for all of us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'managing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: managing
It has been always challenging to manage resources on planet. Some people argue ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to preserve our water and in this essay i will support my opinion with examples. ...
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Suggestion:
...e to some reason then we use our vehicle wisely. similar to that when our phone b...
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Suggestion: Similar
...reason then we use our vehicle wisely. similar to that when our phone battery is drain...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... it less if we do not have electricity. Hence sometime scarcity teaches us best utili...
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Suggestion: us the best
...ricity. Hence sometime scarcity teaches us best utilisation of what we have. Second...
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... scarcity teaches us best utilisation of what we have. Secondly, If we get wat...
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...e more requirement of water than other. Lets take an example, Farmer has ample of wa...
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Message: Did you mean 'fulling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: fulling
...continually than it will be challenging to full fill water requirement for him. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77685950413 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7188449799 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.5803096071 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230410049722 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834663445156 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036770937885 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137574444187 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108741456946 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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