You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:give details of what went wrong

Dear Sir,
I am writing you to complain about the heading/cooling system in the hotel. I am staying in your hotel Park Plaza room no. 201. Yesterday late night i have checked in and realise unusual behaviour of Air conditioner.

It worked fine for first few hours and stop working after that. In night i tried to reach the staff but could not get any response from them. Firstly, This is a winter season and outside temperature is very low. Additionally I am having bad cold and fever. Fortunately, room has two blanket which rescued me. Later morning i took a medicine and some what better now.

Please send a technician as soon as possible or I would prefer room change else it would be impossible for me to stay here tonight.

Regards,
Devendra

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing you to complain about the h...
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...e unusual behaviour of Air conditioner. It worked fine for first few hours and s...
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...s and stop working after that. In night i tried to reach the staff but could not ...
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Suggestion: Additionally,
...on and outside temperature is very low. Additionally I am having bad cold and fever. Fortun...
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...blanket which rescued me. Later morning i took a medicine and some what better no...
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...me. Later morning i took a medicine and some what better now. Please send a technici...
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...ok a medicine and some what better now. Please send a technician as soon as poss...
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...impossible for me to stay here tonight. Regards, Devendra
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...r me to stay here tonight. Regards, Devendra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 626.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 134.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67164179104 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61330454777 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.783582089552 0.622605031667 126% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0984102959 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142266949406 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044333431023 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611782613807 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092165667365 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794709733415 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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