Write a letter to a friend. You borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. In your letter -
• Apologize for damaging the product
• Explain what happened
• Say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Alex,
Hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to seek your apology for accidentally damaging the kindle that I borrowed from you last month. I take full responsibility to get it repaired.
I am sorry for not keeping it safe and by mistake, it got damaged. I know the worth of this kindle in your life as it was gifted by your father on you last birthday.
Two days back, I was reading a book on it while doing lunch. After finishing lunch, I went outside to attend a call from my office. When I came back, I saw the water was spilt on it by mistake by our servant Raju who was cleaning the table. I got furious on him, but the damage was done.
I consulted with a service centre and they advised to keep the kindle in sun for a day, but every practice went in a vain. Finally, they got ready to repair this with a minimum charge of 10 dollars.
I hope you’ll understand and forgive me for this. I will handover this to you once it is fixed.
Warm wishes,
Raj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alex, Hope you are doing good. I am writing th...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... your apology for accidentally damaging the kindle that I borrowed from you last month. I ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l responsibility to get it repaired. I am sorry for not keeping it safe and by...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it safe and by mistake, it got damaged. I know the worth of this kindle in your l...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...service centre and they advised to keep the kindle in sun for a day, but every practice we...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o you once it is fixed. Warm wishes, Raj
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24083769634 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29346862968 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5391184402 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8571428571 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235813691031 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741986273357 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973642454461 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136299653654 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106272327679 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.