Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damage.1. Apologize for damaging the product2. Explain what happened3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

Essay topics:

Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damage.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

Dear Amirreza,

I am writing this letter to say apologize for damaging the printer. I did not know what happen! Last night I just try to connected that to my laptop and tried to installed the software but when I turned it on I heard a loud voice and then I smell burning somethings! I was shocked! What did happen! This raises an important question, if there was any problem on it or not? Please let me know.

Anyway, this morning I got the printer to a support electronic products and they told me The main board was out of work. Now I try to find the same one and buy it for you instead. If I could not find the main board I will start to search for the new device.

Best Regards,

Esmat

PS: Until now I found some similar, I promise to get back it soon. In addition please pass my best wishes to your mom.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20125786164 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2478096525 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5037247177 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133658945802 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633471986167 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668682358385 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736791662738 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398694524472 0.0580467560999 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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