Write a letter to invite a famous person to give a speech at a meeting in you youth club In your letter you should introduce your club explain why you want to invite him her tell him her about the arrangement for the meeting

Dear Sir,
Greetings! I would like to give you cordial invitation through this letter at our lovely youth club for your fantastic speech due to motivate all the individuals for making the appropriate goal in life.
I am a member of Maharani Youth club, which is quite notable in my city, Patiala and it is located in the center of the city beside the Baradari Garden. Moreover, I have seen ample of your videos, which always give me an insipiration for doing the work with efficiency. Therefore, I want to invite you in my club for obtaining your advice in a certain manner, which will surely fruitful for all the members.
Could you kindly attend the event in my club? In the beginning, the warm welcome of seniors will be done by juniors. Then, all the female members will give the flowers to new members. After that, if you give us an opportunity, then we will give you an honor in front of all the audience as a Chief Guest in our occasion. Eventually, all the attendees show their capabilities in bountiful ways for mushrooming the entertainment and dinner will be provided by the catering staff.
It would be an immense pleasure, if you give us a chance to listen your speech and take your guidance in unique manner.

With regards,
Jagjot Singh

Votes
Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and take your guidance in unique manner With regards Jagjot Singh
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...ue manner With regards Jagjot Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54708520179 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47101071329 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57399103139 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 223.0 16.3608247423 1363% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1014.0 76.5299724578 1325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 223.0 16.8248392259 1325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 4.34317383033 668% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281893610223 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281893610223 0.0766984524023 368% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191356713294 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607098155154 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 111.5 8.37731958763 1331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -137.95 70.7449484536 -195% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 87.9 7.45979381443 1178% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.59 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.95 7.59969072165 236% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 8.62886597938 661% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 91.2 8.54432989691 1067% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 8.15463917526 699% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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