Write a letter to the local authorities for requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area.
Mention about the current sports facilities available
What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced.
How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.
Dear Sir,
Greetings of the day! I, Jenny Smith, a resident of Rose Avenue, Brampton, am writing this letter in order to request you to enhance some of the extra sports amenities in our vicinity. Also, I hope that with your kind support in this regard, everyone will surely be benefitted.
At the onset, let me brief you with some information about the existing sport conveniences. Although children, as well as adults, undoubtedly relish the appropriate equipment, along with the well-built sports arena for baseball and soccer matches, there is still a requirement for some more advanced athletic facilities for the young sportspersons.
Further, I would like to appeal for a few more provisions to be added for the professional sportspersons who can channelize their energy appropriately in getting the perfect training near their neighbourhood. Primarily, the utmost priority is for an expert physical trainer, rowing machines and elliptical trainer. Furthermore, an extension of the working hours and any kind of enhancement in the cardio or strength equipment would be highly appreciated.
Finally, because I am also looking forward to pursuing my career as a proficient athlete, the improvements in the sports centre will undeniably prove an asset for the aspirants of my generation. Firstly, as the well-equipped gymnasium is on the other end of the city, the improvised sports club will undoubtedly beneficial instead of wasting time commuting longer distances. Moreover, if the business hours of the fitness centre are extended along with an opening on weekends, this will indeed be very helpful for the working persons by cutting out their sedentary lifestyle and becoming more active and healthy.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon.
With regards,
Jenny Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...h, a resident of Rose Avenue, Brampton, am writing this letter in order to request...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tter in order to request you to enhance some of the extra sports amenities in our vicinity....
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...te equipment, along with the well-built sports arena for baseball and soccer matches, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96829060373 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 290.88556701 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2890100154 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243238550617 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778000190303 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460232953365 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130663820605 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411408975322 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 41.2886597938 233% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.