Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this letter on the behalf of white orchid society for the poor road conditions. We have noticed since many days there is an adverse condition of the roads near to our apartment, after the rain fall roadway is totally washed off and it it creating problem for day to day life.
These days, we are facing lot of problem due to defective roads while going to office and coming back. Because of road issues there is a terrific traffic in the office and school hours. Moreover, children's are getting bad effect on their studies, they are unable to reach their academy on time and principal are complaining to the parents. As well as after school hours while coming back to the home it is taking much longer and which is disturbing their studies.
I believe that, you will look into this concern and send a team to construct the road as soon as possible.
Looking forward to hear positive response from you.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter on the be...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
... fall roadway is totally washed off and it it creating problem for day to day life. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creating problem for day to day life. These days, we are facing lot of pro...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'terrific traffic'.
Suggestion: terrific traffic
...g back. Because of road issues there is a terrific traffic in the office and school hours. Moreove...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... which is disturbing their studies. I believe that, you will look into this ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...truct the road as soon as possible. Looking forward to hear positive respons...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...on as possible. Looking forward to hear positive response from you. Tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...to hear positive response from you. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse from you. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, XYZ
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... Thanking you, Yours faithfully, XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75581395349 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32168277868 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3799532099 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153971800134 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609766406506 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520285564651 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908977388839 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626659514557 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.