Write a letter to the local council about the poor condition of roads in your area. Include the following in your letter: – Explain the situation and roads’ condition. – How does it affect you and other people? – Suggest what measures need to be taken, in your opinion.
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to you on behalf of Model Town residents about the poor condition of roads within the area.
We have been witnessing for a month that most of the roads within the society are in very poor conditions. Besides, there are no marking lanes for the speed limit and zebra crossing, and lots of pits and pots are visible on the main road where most vehicles got stuck. Due to this, I, as well as other people in the area, are facing many issues. The prime problem is that we won’t be able to reach offices on time due to pathetic conditions of the roads including pothole which leads to traffic congestion daily. In addition, kids traveling times have increased because of the traffic low and they often came late from schools, hence children don’t have time to complete their homework and take part in other activities.
I would like you to please assign a team of maintenance from a relevant department to visit the area to prepare an inspection and feasibility reports to get approval for repair work. I would appreciate it if you could select professional staff to mark lanes, and repair the roads within days, and divert the traffic flow via using the alternate routes in a bid to avoid traffic.
I hope you will take care of the matter on a war footing basis, and instruct the concerned department to take immediate steps, so the people can commute without hassles.
Yours truly,
AA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: ON_BEHAVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on behalf' (in the name of, as a representative of)?
Suggestion: on behalf
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to you on behave of Model Town residents about the poor ...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reports getting'.
Suggestion: reports getting
...o prepare an inspection and feasibility reports to get approval for repair work. I would appre...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...routes in a bid to avoid traffic. I hope you will take care of the matter o...
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Line 13, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the people can commute without hassles. Yours truly, AA
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Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e without hassles. Yours truly, AA
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73517786561 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46060685072 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644268774704 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1702719952 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228275294721 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871977741999 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687971618955 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127229076426 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909884808557 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.