Dear Sir
I am Alka Bhat, resident of Jain nagar colony and I am writing you this letter to draw your attention towards the existing vulnerable condition of the roads in my area. Every year municipality corporation constructs the roads but I think the material they use to redesign roads is so cheap that they have to come over and over again for reconstruction of roads.
The roads have completely deteoriated and there is no single place left which is good to walk or drive. There are numerous big and small pits on the road due to which four accidents took place in the last 15 days. Recently, one motorbike landed into the pit at night and the man suffered serious head injuries. Last month, a family of three encountered such a big accident that woman suffered fracture of displaced collar bone.
The roads have completely turned into the way to hell. Residents of my area are facing a lot of problems due to the unexplainable conditions of roads. These kind of accidents are not posing threat to only those who are driving but also to pedestrians. There are chances of collision of vehicles with pedestrians due to imbalance which will lead to damage to vehicle and death of an individual in and out of the car. Moreover, being a low-lying area, water from nearby industrial areas had accumulated on the roads and completely clogged the pits and sewage as well. Eventually, accumulation of water is also contributing factor to epidemic breakout.
To resolve this problem, least municipality or local councils can do is to fill the digs and pits first on priority. Then, authorities can initiate with the process of reconstruction of roads.
I hope that you will show immediate concern towards the dreadful condition of the roads.
Yours Sincerely
Alka Bhat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...the roads but I think the material they use to redesign roads is so cheap that they...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
... the unexplainable conditions of roads. These kind of accidents are not posing threat to o...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ibuting factor to epidemic breakout. To resolve this problem, least municipality...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...emic breakout. To resolve this problem, least municipality or local councils can do i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, then, well, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 937.175257732 157% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85478547855 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76596405163 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 290.88556701 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.413837291 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190633518251 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537497707751 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591240422119 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880559353478 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614517138454 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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