Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with great displeasure to inform you of the road situation which is right opposite to Changkat Secondary School. This current situation has lasted for nearly three weeks now. I am a resident of Changi CC Zone 3 and have been residing over a decade and have never faced any road blocks earlier.
Firstly, due to heavy rainfall the road right opposite to the school has been damaged. This has led to slow moving traffic and congestion during peak hours. Primarily, the school students and teachers are facing issues in the morning to reach school on time and afternoons during dismissal time there are delays too. Nowadays, parents residing in Zone 3 are quite worried about their children due to road safety concerns. Furthermore, bike riders especially grab food, food panda riders are trying to take advantage of this situation and race even faster to expedite their deliveries. This can eventually lead to accidents causing casualties. Therefore, my humble request if the person in- charge could visit and inspect this situation. Lastly, he could determine the urgency of this matter and take an immediate action to restore the damage done to the roads.
Looking forward for your prompt response. Also, please do let me know if I can be of any assistance.
Yours faithfully,
Nur Amirah
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s during dismissal time there are delays too. Nowadays, parents residing in Zone ...
^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
...s, parents residing in Zone 3 are quite worried for their children due to road safety conce...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...eir children due to road safety concerns.. Furthermore, bike riders especially gra...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01801801802 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52475769698 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2927720944 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117596777928 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408140687646 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471078035965 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786575454092 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355090480901 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s during dismissal time there are delays too. Nowadays, parents residing in Zone ...
^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
...s, parents residing in Zone 3 are quite worried for their children due to road safety conce...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...eir children due to road safety concerns.. Furthermore, bike riders especially gra...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01801801802 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52475769698 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2927720944 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117596777928 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408140687646 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471078035965 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786575454092 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355090480901 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.