Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the poor road conditions in the Karelibaug area.
As you know, the roads in the Karelibaug area are already not wide enough, and now, there are potholes as well. The conditions of the road have deteriorated after the recent rains and there are numerous potholes across the majority of the roads. Some of these are as big as 1 square meter. Moreover, there are also some broken drainage covers.
With these issues, it has become very difficult for the people in the area to commute. Not only does it speed down transport, but also it damages vehicles. Most of the people have started seeing some or other issues in their vehicles and an overall increase in the spend for the vehicle maintenance.
Looking at the given situation, I would humbly request you to prioritize the repairs of the roads. It will be a great help to the help of Karelibaug area if these potholes are filled-up and the broken drainage covers are repaired before any unfortunate accident happens.
Looking forward to your positive response in addressing this situation in the interest of the community.
Yours faithfully,
Umang Doshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ed after the recent rains and there are a large number of potholes across the majority of the roa...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eir vehicles and an overall increase in the spend for the vehicle maintenance. Looking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58377630611 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3887432646 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250927090757 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776423182987 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827470213965 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137629143756 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117143824686 0.0580467560999 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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