Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give details of how you and your friends or famiy use the centre
Explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir,
I am Bala living in 3rd street, Bangalore. The Easwar Sport center is located quite close to our home. I would like write this letter to insist that you keep the sports center open. I will explain in details about the effects of keeping this sports center open.
This sports center has been running for so long now I cant remember a time where my life was not associated with it. This is the place I met most of my friends in my locality. This place have more nostalgic memories of me playing football with my friends. Our gang was one of the first people to play football after it got refurbished as a grass courted ground. This will remain our home ground forever.
The ground is the place of many mid age walkers and joggers in the morning and in the late evening. We never had our own park in the locality. But the track circling the football ground served the purpose well.
If the center is closed then lot of people will have to do their morning walks/Jogs elsewhere. People might stop their healthy routines altogether in-case this facility is closed down. This will effect the health and happiness index in the locality.
So keeping all the sentiments , concerns and love that people hold dear for this sports center , I insist on behalf of my locality to not to close the sports center. Please consider the request and do the needful. Awaiting your response.
Yours truly,
Balaprasanth P
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am Bala living in 3rd street, Bangalor...
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...nter has been running for so long now I cant remember a time where my life was not a...
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... met most of my friends in my locality. This place have more nostalgic memories of m...
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...ball after it got refurbished as a grass courted ground. This will remain our hom...
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...ball ground served the purpose well. If the center is closed then lot of people...
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...this facility is closed down. This will effect the health and happiness index in the l...
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...ity. So keeping all the sentiments , concerns and love that people hold dear...
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... people hold dear for this sports center , I insist on behalf of my locality to no...
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... Awaiting your response. Yours truly, Balaprasanth P
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...ponse. Yours truly, Balaprasanth P
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69047619048 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2808327217 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0415670384 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2105263158 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164602958385 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507770219738 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057883865348 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905685900869 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749226657375 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.