Write a letter to manager of the hotel. You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper and interested in one of the job. In your letter:
- Which job you are looking for?
- Explain why you’re interested in the job?
- Explain what prior experience and skills you have in relation to the position?
Dear Sir,
I have seen your advert in the newspaper regarding a number of the jobs at the Grand Hotel. I wish to apply for one of the jobs and writing to you for the same.
I am looking for the job of the Senior Supervisor in the hotel. I am a keen observer and diligent worker have been working in this field for about 2 years. I would like to upgrade myself with the institution and as mentioned increase my knowledge in the respective field.
I have successfully managed the hospitality department working with me in the previous hotel. I have a good knowledge of various aspects of the hotel management. I am a fast learner with great adapting qualities. I can help the team understand better and support them to good decisions when it comes to working under pressure.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Shalaka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of the Senior Supervisor in the hotel. I am a keen observer and diligent worker ...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orking in this field for about 2 years. I would like to upgrade myself with the i...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... knowledge in the respective field. I have successfully managed the hospitali...
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Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... working with me in the previous hotel. I have a good knowledge of various aspect...
^
Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arious aspects of the hotel management. I am a fast learner with great adapting q...
^
Line 6, column 214, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... learner with great adapting qualities. I can help the team understand better and...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... it comes to working under pressure. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64900662252 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67654559467 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1300872548 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8181818182 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287995742502 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104815464581 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972602226807 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187898694145 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124357216662 0.0580467560999 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.