Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working In your letter describe the work you have been doing explain why you can no longer do this work recommend another person who is interested in the work

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:
describe the work you have been doing
explain why you can no longer do this work
recommend another person who is interested in the work

Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am not able to do my volunteer work as a teacher in information technology due to some personal reasons.

As you know, I have been working as a lecturer for more than five years with this community, which gave me many opportunities and enhanced my teaching skills. One of the main goals is I could able to impart fundamental IT skills such as surfing on the internet, use the internet wisely to the students of deprived families, and also helped the older people to learn about new technological innovations.

I sad to say that I will not be able to continue the charity work longer as I was diagnosed with a brain tumor, I would have to go for further treatment in a foreign country.

However, I have found a suitable person in this position; he graduated in computer technology and also showed an interest in being a part of this organization. I presume he would be apt for this community to achieve goals.

So, kindly accept my resignation and contact this person at the earliest.

your faithfully

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...contact this person at the earliest. your faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65263157895 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80529771876 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.324869275 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.285714286 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 16.8248392259 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267408517791 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977326019222 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814556670683 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126013405403 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703650392239 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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