Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Mr.Johnson,
My name is Krishna. I work in the IT department and it is my pleasure working with this organization since a year , however I would like to bring into your kind attention to the problem caused by the unavailability of parking space. Most of the employees of our organization are facing the same issues while parking their vehicles.
On a daily basis, I commute to the office with my Car, and Whenever I try to find a spot to park the car, I am not able to do that as there is no spacious space available. I spend more than fifteen-minute every day to find a spot which is really inconvenient for me. Moreover, as our business is expanding, the number of visitors is also increasing. On top of that, searching for a parking space is time-consuming for both our business clients and employees.
Therefore, to resolve this issue, I would like to suggest that we can request the municipal corporation to allocate some reserved space for the parking nearby to our office or we can allow parking on the ground floor by shifting the canteen to the 3rd floor of the building. It would be highly appreciated if you could consider my suggestion and make appropriate decisions.
I hope these suggestions may be helpful to resolve the problem and looking forward to your positive revert at the earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Krishna Parmar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Johnson
Dear Mr.Johnson, My name is Krishna. I work in the IT ...
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Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...Johnson, My name is Krishna. I work in the IT department and it is my pleasure workin...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...king with this organization since a year , however I would like to bring into your...
^^
Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Therefore, to resolve this issue, I would like to suggest that we can requ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8093220339 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93539909684 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5021255398 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119299220566 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427185539235 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332810497334 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730864482894 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287084882237 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.