Dear sir,
To introduce myself, I am Ujwal Maharjan, technical head at an airlines company named "Himalaya Airlines" located in Nepal. On behalf of my company, I would be attending the seminar on "Aviation security" going to be at Bangkok, Thailand. However, I need some more information regarding the seminar.
First of all, I need the date of seminar to be held since the website has inadequate details. Moreover, I would also like to get breakdown of the program at the event as I have no idea how it is going to be commenced. If the seminar will take whole day, I hope we are provided with lunch and dinner facilities as well.
Second of all, after I land at Bangkok, since I am pretty unaware of the whereabouts there, I seek the name of hotel where I would be staying overnight. Hopefully, the organizer is supposed to arrange accommodation at a 3 star hotel but in case they won't please suggest me an affordable hotel around the event area so that I might not have to travel longer. Furthermore, would they provide airport shuttle to pick me up? What would be the room, facilities and charges?
Thus, I hope you would take my letter in consideration and reply back sooner.
Thank you.
Faithfully yours,
Ujwal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be the room, facilities and charges? Thus, I hope you would take my letter in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, thus, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81018518519 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94033241288 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643518518519 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0456987309 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5833333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902931858278 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352535628363 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047000143848 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536324220308 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173869217185 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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