Write a letter to professional photographer, saying you liked the photos of your family members taken by him, and would you like him to take pictures of another event in your family.
Dear Sir,
My name is Pious, I live in Lucknow. I am writing this letter to thank you for the exceptional photographs captured by you and your team on my cousin’s wedding last month.
The entire family is very happy with the final photographs, especially my sister, with the perfect pictures her marriage has become even more memorable. Not only my close relative but also my neighbors and colleagues have praised your work and dedication.
My parents silver jubilee is coming next month, I would like you to be the photographer for the day. This will be an evening function in Lucknow at hotel Leela with a gathering of around 70 people. My parents are excited and believe that their special moments will not be missed if you are the photographer.
I would like to know if you are available on 22nd April, and whether do you need help with any transportation until the venue. Moreover, would you like to visit the hotel before the event, for any special arrangement. Please call me on 9939393922 if you need anything more.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Pious
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ed anything more. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Pious
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76439790576 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6620449611 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7609303581 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26835736324 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958355421332 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687811983036 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131105221278 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564000266383 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.