Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I sent my master and bachelor diploma as well as transcript to be translated in English as soon as possible.
First of all, please translate it emergently as I am going to apply a doctorate degree at Oxford University. Tomorrow it is the last day to be a candidate to study there.
Secondly, it includes all courses I attanded an my grades. There is also a section reporting my professionality on civil engineering.
Finally, I will scan it and upload it online to website of institution. It is a vitally important proof of my knowledge and experiences. Unless they are sent, my application will not be taken into account. I hope it will be ready until tomorrow. If I can help you in any other way, please let me know.
I am looking forward to receiving your reply promptly.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dly, it includes all courses I attanded an my grades. There is also a section repo...
^^
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'my'?
Suggestion: an; my
...dly, it includes all courses I attanded an my grades. There is also a section reporti...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...promptly. Yours faithfully, Mary Brown
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95902329434 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701298701299 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3069687403 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0833333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124103919484 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352758828638 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480446588221 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639971821863 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656892871497 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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