Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to you express my dissatisfaction regarding the trip which I have taken through your company. Let me explain, I traveled 1 of October, I was shocked by the standard of food, comfort and safety.
Company promised that the trip will be started exit at 8 'o clock in the morning but it was taken 2 hours extra due to driver who was came late on that day,it mood was spoiled. Also, mobile phone was used by driver while driving and top of that, drive very fast in the narrow roads which make trip uncomfortable. To make it more worse, as you know that winter season is running, but hotels AC could not turned switch off besides this, blanket was not provided by hotel management due to this I caught from fever next day and unable to enjoy remaining trip.
What is more,we went restaurant in order to take lunch but it did not offered by the restaurant when we asked about it from manger, he told us they do not include the charges of lunch so that if we want to take lunch, we would had to pay extra for it. apart from this, staff members was not co-operative with clients, they were argumentative by nature
I feel, I am entitled to a full refund and a written apology for the misinformation contained in your advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding this matter as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding the trip which I have taken through your company Let me explain I traveled ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he trip which I have taken through your company Let me explain I traveled 1 of O...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aveled 1 of October I was shocked by the standard of food comfort and safety C...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...ken 2 hours extra due to driver who was came late on that dayit mood was spoiled Als...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...hich make trip uncomfortable To make it more worse as you know that winter season is runni...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
...ason is running but hotels AC could not turned switch off besides this blanket was no...
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...s running but hotels AC could not turned switch off besides this blanket was not ...
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... morewe went restaurant in order to take lunch but it did not offered by the res...
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...estaurant in order to take lunch but it did not offered by the restaurant when w...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'offer'
Suggestion: offer
...in order to take lunch but it did not offered by the restaurant when we asked about i...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... that if we want to take lunch we would had to pay extra for it apart from this sta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ents they were argumentative by nature I feel I am entitled to a full refund an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, so, while, apart from, i feel, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41700404858 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47597911001 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 247.0 16.3608247423 1510% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1091.0 76.5299724578 1426% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 247.0 16.8248392259 1468% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 88.0 4.34317383033 2026% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127837204695 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127837204695 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796906024481 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625049900786 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 122.9 8.37731958763 1467% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -162.31 70.7449484536 -229% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.3 7.45979381443 1304% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.84 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.32 7.59969072165 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 100.8 8.54432989691 1180% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 123.0 8.15463917526 1508% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.