There is no doubt that getting a job has become hard nut to crack for new generation in the cut throat competition age. Therefore, internship training was offered by approximately in every university as a pert of their programme . Although doing unpaid work can lead to some problem in youth, I think students can take some benefits from this practice.
There are many advantage doing unpaid for particular time period, the first and foremost reason is that if candidate work with the organisation, they would get practical knowledge which is indefensible in order to get higher salary job in future. For example, in contemporary era,experienced candidates are being selected by organisation as compered to fresher. Secondly, theoretical knowledge has been instilled in the students when they are studying in university, this knowledge cannot be remember longer time before putting it into practical actions because practical things can remember for long time. Furthermore, doing work with studies increase the stress level as a result, student can understand the future pressure and they can decide whether this degree is opt for them or not.
On the other hand, with each passing days, academic burden has been increasing since 21 century, so that if pupils go with this under pressure, they will lose their confidence level due to a lot of stress. As well as academic performance also effected badly because they have to do work in the weekends, as a consequence, study assignments were replaced by working shift. Last but not least, Furthermore, youngsters tend to lose their temper easily so this kind of exhausting work may encourage them to treat their workmate wrongly just to release to stress.
In Conclusion, given after mentioned above in formation it is abundantly clear that while doing work with organisation leads to some issues, it benefits take more water than drawbacks. it is like double edge sword.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1858974359 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83189308604 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3828066036 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.9166666667 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132319235344 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467908905418 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282264724454 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759796709403 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021110235274 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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