Write a letter to your favorite restaurant. Include the following
- Your reason for writing
- What you like about the restaurant
- Suggestions for improvement
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is James Stone, a frequent customer at your restaurant. I am writing to commend you for the services you give and recommend few things that could be introduced to take your organisation to the next level.
I must say, I always enjoy each and all your cuisines I have tried out, they all tasted well cooked and delicious. The food that particularly stand out for me is the special local menu Pounded yam and Egusi soup, I have come back for the same food weekly for three months in a row.
Also, I love the ambient, site and the view from the restaurant. Being suited on the harbour close to the beach makes it a prefect spot for relaxation especially with the busy life schedules in Lagos.
Recently, I observed the customer service is dropping. This may be as a result of the increased patronage from people from far and new. I would suggest to enrol your staff for a customer service training or workshop so they can appreciate the value of customers and the need to treat us as kings and queens.
I hope to see a favourable change in their attitude soon.
Yours faithfully,
Chris Omon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is James Stone, a frequent custo...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l local menu Pounded yam and Egusi soup, I have come back for the same food weekl...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... food weekly for three months in a row. Also, I love the ambient, site and the v...
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Line 8, column 145, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest enrolling'.
Suggestion: suggest enrolling
...e from people from far and new. I would suggest to enrol your staff for a customer service train...
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Line 8, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e need to treat us as kings and queens. I hope to see a favourable change in the...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir attitude soon. Yours faithfully, Chris Omon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61881188119 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52161035306 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5410154133 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8181818182 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246300345665 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074279717699 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657321107608 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105945800057 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842253351422 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.