Write a letter to your favourite restaurant.Include the following:– Your reason for writing– What you like about the restaurant– Suggestions for improvement

Dear Sir,
I am writing to show my gratitude towards years of great services you are providing to us. I am an old customer of your reputed restaurant and I love the simplicity of your restaurant and deliciousness of the recipes.i almost tried every dish in vegetarian section of your menu particularly the daal makhani of Indian cousin.I expect the same taste of your daal for next many years as it reminds me of my grandma's recipe of same.please don't change this deLicacy.

Furthermore, the ambience of your restaurant is so appealing. The placidness Of surroundings occupies your mind and soul. Staff is very cooperative and services rendered by you are very good.prices are also reasonable.

However, I was wondering, if you consider my suggestion for improvement.it will add up in your rating. Increase the number of staff in your restaurant.people have to wait for long to receive the food they have ordered because of few waiters.

I hope you will consider my suggestion .

Yours sincerely
CHHAVI.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...larly the daal makhani of Indian cousin.I expect the same taste of your daal for ...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me of my grandmas recipe of same.please dont change this deLicacy. Furthermore, ...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... I hope you will consider my suggestion . Yours sincerely CHHAVI.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10778443114 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1229925525 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.0609535814 44.8134815571 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315401586379 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119623892286 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475141014153 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16349218034 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532710646759 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.