Cosmetic surgery in this day and age is hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. People can surrender themselves to a cosmetic surgeon's scalpel due to numerous reasons. However the drawbacks of cosmetic surgery cannot be overlooked.
First of all, it is worth considering the reasons for which people modify their looks with the help of cosmetic treatments. First reason is perhaps a person who cannot stand facing mirror and in low self esteem due to his/her own appearance can opt for plastic surgery and boost the confidence. Secondly there are plethora of occupations that demand impeccable beauty for instance Air-hostess and actors in glamour world, need to have a perfect look in order to be in a lime-light.
Furthermore, Plastic surgery can play a crucial role in restoring the actual look if someone is a victim of a major accident.
On the flip side, drawbacks of cosmetic treatments also cannot be ignored as they are loaded with ample chemicals and even steriods. Frequent use of such harmful chemicals can lead to skin diseases and cancer in a long run.
To sum up, cosmetic treatments can be a blessing for some but can also bring negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'surgeons'' or 'surgeon's'?
Suggestion: surgeons'; surgeon's
... can surrender themselves to a cosmetic surgeons scalpel due to numerous reasons. Howeve...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...rgeons scalpel due to numerous reasons. However the drawbacks of cosmetic surgery canno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7484566492 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2184094233 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136410861565 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560491166437 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323993097891 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696382539156 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341723204538 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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