Write a letter to your friend to inform him about your visit to his country.
You should say:
- Why you chose his country
- What have you already planned
- Ask for some assistance/information
Dear cs,
Finally, I have decided to visit you and this letter finds you in the best of health and happiness. I have 4 weeks of vacation and I am planning to visit united states of America in the next month. I am ready with the itinerary to visit the beautiful destination.
I am leaving Dubai on 22nd of January. I have planned to visit New York, the happening place in the first week to see the statue of liberty, time square and the museum, followed by the stay in the Washington to see the memorials and monuments in the next week. I will catch you in Virginia in the third week and will enjoy the scenic view of the beach and will do shopping.
However, you have almost one month ahead to plan my stay with you in Virginia. Since I have another two weeks there, will plan what you say. I am really dying hard to see you and your territory.
Yours truly,
Ms.
- A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter-Thank him/her for inviting you-Describe how you felt about his/her family members-Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place 73
- Write a letter to your friend to inform him about your visit to his country.You should say:-Why you chose his country-What have you already planned-Ask for some assistance/information 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to visit the beautiful destination. I am leaving Dubai on 22nd of January. I ...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I am leaving Dubai on 22nd of January. I have planned to visit New York, the hap...
^
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...morials and monuments in the next week. I will catch you in Virginia in the third...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, really, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29518072289 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2520856932 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.782989876 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260226883369 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10983682524 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754614835383 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188957448375 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945837762276 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.