Dear Amber,
I hope you and your family doing well. I am writing this letter to invite you to our family function on the occasion of the Chinese New Year celebration at our club house on 25th of January.
It is a great time to plan a vacation to Hong Kong. That time coincided with the Lunar New Year, and there is a strong New Year atmosphere in Hong Kong. I have planned to invite my family and friends to have BBQ dinner in club house this year, meanwhile, there will be a lion dance performance at the same time. After the dinner, a large firework display will be held next to club house. All of us can join to let off fireworks.
I still remember that you never let off fireworks before, and it is the right time to play. Therefore, I would really appreciate if you can visit and join us in this party, as this will be great time to introduce you with my whole family.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Warm wishes,
Suki
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party 73
- Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied He She would like your advice about finding a place to live Write an email to your friend In your email describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, still, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30555555556 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23564694976 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0840640866 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4545454545 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178928565663 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640981578305 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752965320586 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11395069229 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825352068518 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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