Dear sunji,
Trust you are doing good, I hope you are getting along with your new post at your place of work as the Manager of faithywealth fashion home, congratulations once more my friend. Am writing this letter to you to recommend an interesting book that I read last month.
I have not read and interesting book as "Things fall apart" in a long while, so interesting, and helps one think positively different in all ramifications.
When reading this book "Things fall apart" it helps you understand the areas you need transformation as an individual, it help in your daily communications and creative interactions around people, at you place of work and home
I really recommend you read this book because I know how much you love to work on yourself as a person, you will really gain a lot of wisdom that will benefit you and your career in life
My friend you can actually get this book from any book shop around you or you can as well get it on Amazon.
Yours truly
Akumbu
- In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes However some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution To what extent do you agree or disagree
- some people say government should subsidised the fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper Some other say it should be tax to unhealthy food discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning Why does this happen What are the solutions money problem earn more money addictions of drugs and alcohols 56
- Physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools Do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: Am I
...e, congratulations once more my friend. Am writing this letter to you to recommend...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...eed transformation as an individual, it help in your daily communications and creati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76271186441 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91099193513 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.22879233 44.8134815571 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.6 76.5299724578 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.4 16.8248392259 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463231281598 0.216113520407 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211834966723 0.0766984524023 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134645620845 0.0603063233224 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263396660525 0.12726935374 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909361282445 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 8.37731958763 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.