Dear Faith,
I want to recommend that you read a very interesting book titled "crushing". I vividly remember the first time you gave me a book to read and this gave me a clear picture about certain areas of life. Indeed readers are leaders!
Reading this book I mentioned earlier will enlighten you generally and help you make more accurate positive decisions in life. I'd say on my part that this book is a bestseller despite the fact that it hasn't been declared in the records yet. The writer showcased a great knowledge of experience and this makes it stand out from a lot of books which I have read lately so it's imperative that I also make great recommendations like this to enable our world to be a better place.
You can purchase this material on digital stores like Amazon or walk into a book store and request to see if it's available there too.
I can't wait to hear from you
Your Friend,
Michael
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
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Suggestion: hasn't
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... enable our world to be a better place. You can purchase this material on digita...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55421686747 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74349810025 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3410153351 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319440057021 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144889693929 0.0766984524023 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508163660731 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1228919606 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819612645376 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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