Dear Mac,
Hope you had a great day at school today. I know it has been a while since we spent time together, but I have not forgotten about the good times we spent together whenever we had free periods. I am writing this letter to let you know that I'll be throwing a party for Charles this weekend.
The reason I am going to throw this party for Charles is because he has been feeling sad and homesick since he got back to school. When he came back this semester, he told me that he's missing everyone at home, and he wished he could have spent more time with family.
Thus, The party will take place in the evening on the 4th of February 2023 which is on a Saturday. However, this will be a perfect timing, and everyone will be free after their various schedules during the day, so the party will be a full house.
Anyway, I suggest that you buy two bottles of vodka before you start coming to the venue. Also, I forgot to buy water, so I will appreciate it if you get like four packs of bottled water too. Finally, get a pack of cigarette while coming because we have a few smokers in the house tonight, so it is expedient we make cigarettes available.
Can't wait to see you.
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mac, Hope you had a great day at school today...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...ame back this semester, he told me that hes missing everyone at home, and he wished...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...dient we make cigarettes available. Cant wait to see you. Adam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, however, if, so, thus, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27192982456 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15787690764 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1709539884 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5454545455 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149494829946 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668126838349 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540763966152 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821381091199 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344384719664 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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