Write a letter to your friend telling him her that you have won a photography competition In your letter Describe the event Describe the photograph you have sent for the competition Invite him her to the exhibition where your photograph is presented

Dear Jane,

I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to express my happiness with you that I won the photography competition held at Silver Ground during the Sports event last week. Early morning, I got an email for my selection and I felt on cloud nine and there are no words to express my joyous.

First of all, I am very thankful to you for giving a wonderful HD camera as a birthday gift. I really love it. With the help of this camera, I capture every sporting event such as race, long jump, disk throw, and table tennis. Here, the best of the best players took participate and won gold, silver, bronze medal along with cash prizes. For photography competition, I sent the nearly 1o-15 photographs with different variations like zoom effect, blur effects, players face capture while playing, panoramic type, and dark or light shades.

So, I am inviting to you join me for the exhibition which is held on 2nd September at Goldwings Museum, Drive London. In this museum, my selected photographs will be displayed. It would be great if you come and be a part of my happiness. Moreover, top-ranked photographers are invited here. Therefore, we will get a chance to meet and know more about their passion.

I will wait for your prompt reply.

Yours Faithfully,
Emily

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73451327434 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59700967215 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690265486726 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5610061776 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212587415079 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652552866793 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519709555876 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11728040792 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242422548212 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.