Some people think that in the modern society becoming more dependent on each other, while others say that individuals are becoming more independent. Discuss both views and give Your own opinion?
Nowadays, in the advanced technology era, people are becoming smart and independent by adapting the global village, but some people vouch for the statement and opine that society is relying on others for the sake of the work. This essay will shed light upon both opinions with relevant examples.
On one side, modern automation makes people lives easy and convenient because these days, society believes in smart work. The reason for this, there is no need to do manual efforts for a specific task with the help of automatic machines. Therefore, it saves lots of time and hard work. As a result, people become intelligent and independent. For example, in order to construct a building, there is no need to hire enough man labour. Most of the tasks are done by the machines such as pulling a huge amount of concrete and cement to different floors or rooftops, bulldozer being used for it that do a task in less time where workers will take a couple of months doing so. Consequently, these tasks are less laborious.
On the other side, some people may think individuals are becoming dependant on each other. In the marketing business, due to the cut-throat competition among different companies, everyone wants to win this rat race, therefore, they are hiring the salesperson who is able to attract more customers as well as increase their product's sale by which there is a chance of company's growth and rise in the economy. For instance, the demand for one's products will also be increased. Therefore, companies depend on their skilled workers for the sale of the products.
To conclude, without any doubt, this is a mixed bag. Although, society is dependent on different resources for their sake of earning, however, by doing task independently helps to seek more knowledge and experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...ople may think individuals are becoming dependant on each other. In the marketing busines...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e economy. For instance, the demand for ones products will also be increased. Theref...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95695364238 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66255022872 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592715231788 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.92263441 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211677842243 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747241649258 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119105359229 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136321595402 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618767707668 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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