Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter:
A invite him/her for to a public event in your country
b Describe the public event
c Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit
Dear Rachel,
Hope you’re doing well. I am writing to invite you for an upcoming sunburn event in Canada this year. As per my information, the event is scheduled to begin from 19th June at 10 AM in Brampton.
This is an ultimate event I have been waiting for the whole year. There will be lots of new bands playing apart from this there are also 4D shows. They have organized for bonfire and camping night as well. A bunch of my friends will be accompanying us.
I’m pretty sure you’ll be keen to attend it. I have arranged for your visa and tickets. Also, I have planned few more exciting and adventurous things for you. Once you’re in the city we’ll have a gala time together just like we use to do in our old days.
Hope you accept my invite. Looking forward to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Jessica
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... have a gala time together just like we use to do in our old days. Hope you accept...
^^^
Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...e you accept my invite. Looking forward to see you soon. Best wishes, Jessica
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58278145695 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42660790946 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701986754967 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9298507121 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.4285714286 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.7857142857 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198096870049 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681969399271 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651189127055 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105053701715 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393212493365 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.1 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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