Dear Phoebe,
I hope you are prospering and preparing well for your upcoming dissertation. Since you have a few weeks off after the submission why don't you plan for visiting India? We would love to have you here. Moreover, I have some tempting things to offer, which I am sure would be impossible for you to deny.
Our city is conducting the 1st International Public Art Festival on 1st September and the winner with the best Art would be awarded Rs 1 Lakh, also, I heard that the painting would be displayed in the London Art Museum. I think it would be a great opportunity for you to showcase your talent and spice up your CV. Moreover, this would be a great chance to remise all the memories and update each other with all the recent happenings. I am sure you have heard about the new Thai restaurant which will be opening next month. I am thrilled to experience this new cuisine with you.
Do not worry about your stay and food. My home is always open to you.
Waiting to hear from you soon.
Your's lovingly,
Amy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51063829787 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43033306087 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8726250615 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2307692308 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232331301568 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950109809048 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710027761974 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127820086624 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621376737269 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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