As we progress towards the mid of the century, people have started to realize the importance of time. The saying, "time is money" seems legit. People look for alternatives to save as much time as they can and use it for other rational purposes. And, one of reasons this has become possible is because of online education.
In the era of technological revolution, flabbergasting internet connectivity and infinite sources, online education has made possible to learn from remote areas as well. When it takes hours for some to reach schools, live education has paved way for making education accessible for all. For Instance, Nowadays, there is no need to look for a teacher trained in foreign language to teach you a second language, Webinars and prerecorded sessions have made learning from a native speaker or even a Cambridge professor possible. Furthermore, apart from saving time, it has made studying more convenient and fun. Especially for mothers and office goers. They can take the sessions anytime as per their choice. Most online classes provide authentic and certified courses which help to improve the CVs of many people. It has made life a little less stressful and made more doors open up.
On the other hand, this has some disadvantages too. while it gives the comfort of convenience it has also made a lot of people procrastinators. Some keep on stretching a 2-month course for a year and end up wasting both time and money, while others often end up getting distracted because of no supervision.
To sum up, I personally feel, distance learning has much more advantages than traditional learning and should be promoted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... hand, this has some disadvantages too. while it gives the comfort of convenience it ...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... hand, this has some disadvantages too. while it gives the comfort of convenience it ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, second, so, then, well, while, apart from, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85925534753 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4263076181 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113369810282 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360710096799 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449947182374 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678724178154 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389583081528 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.