Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nothing lasts forever, not even basic human nature. And as the famous saying goes, "Time heals everything." I personally feel that drug addicts too,need time, support and an atmosphere of warmth and love to overcome their habit.
Drug and alcohol abuse is quite common nowdays. Medical research has proved it to be more of a psychological illness due to overwhelming stress, anxiety and depression rather than just an addiction because of what most say "bad influence". Treating this as illness will not only help them cure at a faster rate but also help more and more addicts to open up and reach for ailment. They can have the support of family, friends and the medical team too to help them overcome faster. Moreover, many famous celebrities, For Instance, Lindsay Lohan, Robert Dowrney Junior, Angelina Jolie, have successfully battled this and have reached heights in their respective career. Had they been imprisoned and considered criminals, they wouldn't have stretched this far in their lives.
On the other had, Making drug addiction a criminal offence and sending them to the jail would help to control the addiction from the roots itself. Teenagers and young adults who recklessly try drugs on peer pressure would think twice before doing so. Furthermore, sending them to Jail would seclude them from their peers and help in rehabilitation. Chances of them getting readdicted would be way less as they would be away from the source and people for a longer time.
To sum up, In my opinion, Drug addicts should not be considered as criminals. Instead they should be treated by trained medical faculty under care and observation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32841328413 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15124398281 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8374537684 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174076397007 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666362114051 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675301112273 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126043942799 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969020666319 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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