Dear Mr Seth,
I am writing you this letter to apprise you about the water leakage issue in your house. I rented your 2BHK apartment in Lake view society earlier this month.
Initially, it all looked fine until a few days when I noticed dampening of the bedroom ceiling near the master bedroom. At first, I thought it to be from the outside pillar due to monsoon and heavy rainfall but soon I noticed the bathroom ceiling getting damp too. In fact, it has progressed to such an extent that water dribbles constantly throughout the day. I think the leakage is coming from the bathroom of the above flat. Recently they renovated their bathroom and installed a bathtub.
It is causing a lot of inconveniences as we are unable to use that bathroom and the dampness has caused constant bad odour across the whole room. I personally think, inspecting the upper floor bathroom by an expert and fixing the defect would solve the problem.
Hoping for your earliest action
Thanking you,
Neelam S
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... it all looked fine until few days when i noticed dampening of the bedroom ceilin...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to monsoon and heavy rainfall, but soon i noticed the bathroom ceiling getting da...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84302325581 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4682612124 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703488372093 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2896148906 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168738818982 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591415996974 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693763696579 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105722998835 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757851257549 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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